Loading collection data...
Collections are a way for you to organize kata so that you can create your own training routines. Every collection you create is public and automatically sharable with other warriors. After you have added a few kata to a collection you and others can train on the kata contained within the collection.
Get started now by creating a new collection.
Reading the description over again, I think that it is economical enough to resolve the suggestion; feel free to re-open the case if you find anything you still feel falls on the extraneous side :)
I did a quick pare-down -- I might go back and cut things down even more but it's a lot less intimidating for the time being!
Should be all set!
Should be fixed now.
Got too excited :) Fixing now! Thanks again Paul!
Good point! Fixing now..
Thanks Paul! Your slings and arrows are very much appreciated ;) You are absolutely right, I sort of went into writing mode and never really stepped back to look at it with fresh eyes. I will commence operation Hemingway and separate the story from the logic ASAP.
Nice kata! I think it could be a little clearer with its instructions, however; instead of saying 'climbing up to x meters,' maybe something more along the lines of 'climbing up the bamboo "x" amount of meters every day?' I was just a little confused when I saw the "to" in there, my first reaction was that it was climbing to the 'x' height everyday; ie, no matter what the current position, the worm was climbing to '10', if 'x' was passed '10' as its argument. Just a little confusing on first read; otherwise, great job :)